About the story
| Length | 63 minutes, then about three minutes of the story’s own sounds |
|---|---|
| Where | A wide, slow river winding through water meadows, from Hollin Lock to the bend below the old mill |
| When | High summer. Golden evening into a warm, starlit night. |
| Weather | Clear, warm and still, with evening mist over the meadows and a light dew |
| In Lalai | Included with a subscription, and in the 7 free nights for new subscribers |
Like every Lalai story, it is read slowly in a low voice, over a painted scene that moves softly and dims as the story goes on. Nothing goes wrong and nobody is in a hurry, so there is nothing to follow and nothing to remember.
Who is in it
- Ada About seventy, small, brown and cheerful. Has spent twenty summers on the Marigold.
- The Marigold Her small yellow houseboat with a green roof and geraniums on top.
- Joss The young lock keeper at Hollin Lock, who grows roses.
How the hour goes
The story moves through five parts. Each is a little slower and quieter than the one before, and the last drifts off with long rests and no goodbye.
- 0–7 min Golden Evening
- 7–23 min Down the River
- 23–42 min The Bend Below the Mill
- 42–51 min The Cabin
- 51–56 min Drift
The sounds under the voice
Real recordings play under the words, and you choose the balance: more voice, more ambience or even. When the story ends, its sounds can carry on for a few minutes, half an hour or all night.
- The boat’s slow putter, until the engine is turned off
- Water along the hull while the boat is under way
- Slow lapping beside the cabin once she moors
- The weir beside the old mill, far off
- Crickets in the long grass
Read the opening
The first 1000 words, exactly as they are read. The story goes on for about 54 minutes more.
There is a river that runs through the middle of the country, wide and green and very slow, so slow that in the summer it hardly seems to move at all. It winds through water meadows and past old mills and under low stone bridges, and along its banks grow alders and tall reeds and meadowsweet, and the swans that live on it glide along its surface as though they had been placed there, carefully, by someone who wanted everything to be just so.
On this river, every summer, a small houseboat makes its way slowly downstream. It is painted a soft yellow, with a green roof, and green shutters on its little windows, and its name is written on the bow in curling white letters. The Marigold. On its roof there are pots of geraniums, and a small herb garden in a wooden trough, and a folding chair, and a pile of faded cushions. And on its little back deck, holding the tiller, there is usually a woman named Ada.
Ada was a small, brown, cheerful woman of seventy or so, with short white hair and a straw hat, and she had spent every summer of the last twenty years on the Marigold, drifting down the river from the hills toward the sea, and every autumn coming slowly back again. This is the story of one evening in the middle of that summer, one of those long, warm, golden evenings that seem to go on and on, as though the day could not quite bring itself to end.
It had been a hot day, but the heat had softened now into something warm and gentle and heavy, and the light had turned the colour of honey. The Marigold's engine was running very slowly, with a low, soft, even putter, like a contented bee, and the boat moved down the middle of the river at the pace of someone walking along the bank with nowhere in particular to go.
Ada stood at the tiller in her bare feet, her hand resting on the smooth wooden handle, which was warm from the sun. The deck under her feet was warm too, the boards soaked through with the heat of the whole long day, and the warmth came up through the soles of her feet, pleasantly, like standing on a sunlit stone. She had a cup of cold mint tea on the rail beside her, and every so often she picked it up, and sipped it, and set it down again.
The river here was wide and still and very clear, and looking down over the side, she could see the long green weeds on the bottom, streaming gently in the slow current, like hair in water, and small silver fish hanging in the shadows among them, facing upstream, perfectly still, waiting for nothing. The water was brown-gold in the shallows and deep green in the middle, and on its surface lay the reflection of the sky, and the trees, and the yellow boat, sliding softly across it.
On either side, the water meadows stretched away, flat and green and full of wildflowers, buttercups and clover and ragged robin, and tall, creamy meadowsweet, whose scent drifted over the water, sweet as honey and almonds. Here and there stood old alders, and ash trees with round, bushy heads, and beyond the meadows rose low green hills, and on the hills, a church tower, and a few farms, all of them golden in the evening light.
A pair of swans came gliding downstream, a little faster than the Marigold, and passed her on the left, without seeming to move their feet at all. They were followed, at a little distance, by four grey cygnets in a line, like small, fluffy, grey boats being towed on invisible strings. Ada watched them pass. The father swan turned his head and looked at her for a moment, with his dark eye, and then turned away, quite unconcerned, and led his family on down the river.
On a low branch overhanging the water sat a kingfisher, a small, bright, blue and orange bird, perfectly still, looking down. As the boat came near, it dropped from the branch and flew away low over the water, straight as a ruled line, a streak of blue, and was gone around the bend. Ada smiled. She saw it every evening, or one very like it, and every evening it did exactly the same thing.
The river curved gently to the right, and Ada leaned on the tiller, just a little, and the Marigold followed the curve, slowly, easily, as if she knew the way herself. Ahead, past the bend, a line of white-painted posts stood out against the green, and beyond them, the tall wooden gates of the lock. The engine puttered on, soft and steady. And the evening had begun.
Hollin Lock was an old lock, and a small one, with walls of green, mossy stone, and two pairs of heavy wooden gates, and a white cottage beside it with roses around the door. The lock keeper was a young man named Joss, tall and thin and brown from the sun, who had kept the lock ever since his grandfather had handed it on to him. He was sitting on the long white beam of the gate as the Marigold came near, with a mug in his hand, and when he saw her, he lifted it.
“Evening, Ada,” he called across the water. “Evening, Joss,” said Ada. “Going down?” “Going down,” said Ada. “Just to the bend below the mill, tonight.” Joss nodded, and set his mug on the gatepost, and leaned his back against the long white beam, and began, slowly, to push it open.
The heavy gate swung open, slowly, with a long, low creak of old wood, and the water beyond it lay smooth and dark and level with the river. Ada eased the Marigold forward, into the lock, between the high stone walls, and brought her gently to a stop, and Joss took her rope and looped it loosely around a post, and walked back, and pushed the gate closed behind her. It met its partner with a soft, deep, wooden knock.
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